Skadden, Arps, Slate, Meagher & Flom LLP is a global law firm that illustrates the importance of maintaining a formal tone.
In their communications. — whether it’s website content, client briefings, or legal updates — they typically avoid direct address like "you" and instead use more formal language.
For instance, rather than saying, “You will benefit from our legal expertise,” they might say, “Clients benefit from our extensive legal expertise in corporate law.”
The decision about the audience-addressing aspect of your brand’s tone of voice also depends on your pricing strategy.
Premium and luxury brands often use formal tone to assert their status.
If a luxury brand says, “You’re going to love this watch,” it may feel too casual or overconfident, undermining the exclusivity the brand wants to convey.
Rolex is a great example of this. As a luxury brand, it walks a fine line when it comes to direct communication.
Rolex projects exclusivity, heritage, and a sense of timeless prestige, so uses more formal language that speaks to the craft, history, and status of its products, often avoiding direct "you" language to maintain an air of sophistication and distance.
By refraining from directly addressing the audience, Rolex emphasizes the notion that its watches are not for everyone — they are symbols of achievement and luxury, acquired by those who have reached a certain status.
This implicit message supports their branding strategy of exclusivity, which might be diluted if they spoke too directly or casually to potential customers.
Add these Writitude rules to your custom tone of voice guide to adjust the sentence structure to your brand’s communication strategy:
Ok, so there are both pros and cons to addressing your brand’s audience directly. How should you choose?
When deciding whether to use "you" in your communication, it’s essential to ask:
The decision to use “you” should be a deliberate one, guided by a deep understanding of your brand and its audience.
When used thoughtfully, it can create a meaningful connection that resonates with your customers and strengthens your brand's voice.
But used carelessly, it can backfire, alienating the very people you’re trying to reach.
Whatever your choice of address, you need to use it consistently.
Consider how jarring it would be if a brand like Dove, known for its empowering and personal "you" statements, suddenly switched to a more formal, detached tone.
The shift would not only confuse the audience but also dilute the brand’s established identity.
Similarly, if a brand like Rolex, which maintains an air of exclusivity through formal language, started using casual "you" statements, it could undermine the prestige and sophistication they’ve meticulously built.
Inconsistent use of address might come across as indecisive or inauthentic.
Your audience might struggle to grasp your brand’s true personality, which can weaken your overall message and impact.
So, once you’ve decided on the tone and address that best fits your brand and resonates with your audience, stick with it.
Whether you choose the personal touch of "you" or the authoritative distance of a more formal tone, consistency will help cement your brand’s voice in the minds of your audience.
The way to achieve consistency in audience address is to make your preference clear in your brand book.
However, if your brand book is not automated, it still will leave large room for human error as your content producers change.
If you want to make sure the address to the audience, as well as all other aspects of your brand’s tone of voice remain constant, automate your brand book with Writitude!
By giving your brand book more teeth, you will strengthen your brand’s character with every piece of copy.